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Never
Contributed by
Artemis03
on
Saturday, 18th December 2004 @ 08:26:46 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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I'm not good enough,
i'm worth absolutly nothing.
Sick of this expectation stuff
that has me mentally suffering.
Never will they be happy
with what I can do
Because all they can see
is what they want me to do.
I can't be what they want me to be
Nor can I meet their eyes.
Better off somewhere dying
then here living this life.
Never ever will I be
here upon where they're happy.
Not here not now..just Never.
Never will I ever, be better.
Copyright ©
Artemis03
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2004-12-18 20:26:46]
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Re: Never
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by autumngreeneyes on
Saturday, 18th December 2004 @ 08:32:27 PM AEST
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| I just did a write comparing myself to my old worn out ragg mop..saying it was better because it picked up dirt. LOL.. this reminds me so much of that. Please don't be like me..please don't care so much what others think. The fact that you write so well and care to post says a lot..I'm about to stop.. no one reads me any more. I have about 3 people who read and comment.. so I'm about to stop. Once I do that, well, who knows? So please.. |
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Re: Never
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by Apolla on
Saturday, 18th December 2004 @ 08:34:13 PM AEST
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I can understand that ur upset right now. It was a great write though.
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Re: Never
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 18th December 2004 @ 08:38:11 PM AEST
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(While greeneyes is right, she forgets to notice that most of her poetry she doesn't leave up for very long, and thus doesn't give everyone time to see what she writes. I *know* for a fact she's posted more than 19 poems!) In any case, I know what those feelings are like. I gave out invites to a party tonight and only my kids have showed up so far. Expressive write.
Cheers! |
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