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Your Words Bring My Heart To A Stop
Contributed by
Doriens_Picture
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Sunday, 19th December 2004 @ 01:52:49 AM in AEST
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I am almost dead because of you
Your poems are so much like you
Sad and dark and so amazing
Everything about you overwhelms me
Leaving me in utter admiration
Your words bring my heart to a stop
I die after a line and am brought back to life
By the line that follows and this happens continuously
Until the poem ends and sometimes I dont come back
Your words become too much for my heart to take and so it burst
There inside my chest leaving nothing but an empty shell
While my soul is set free and sores until it misses you
Until I am brought back by the beauty of what you write
Your soul is precious to me and I want to protect your fragile heart
I want to take you by the hand and kiss your broken skin
I want to kiss your lips and bite them softly
To have the taste of them haunt my life
I want to put your hands on my face and feel them turn silk
Into a frail thing as they warm my cheek and you to kiss me again
In this kiss we breathe as one and I take a part of you into me
And you take a part of me into you so we would never truly be apart
Both parts we will always cherish and keep near out hearts
And you and I will always feel whole
The follwoing poem is just one i wrote a bit ago
My heart has been longed consumed
By this sadness that chooses to fade away then come back only to resume
Its ways of belittling my heart mind and soul
Its sole purpose is to swallow me whole
I am broken and waiting for my demons to finely hone
The ways they make me want to kill my self making me slash away right to the bone
I have cut so much in so few years my skin has grown numb
Nullified by the dying nerves my skin has come undone
But I die painfully and not quickly enough
Death breaths behind my neck his cold huffs and puffs
But he says its not my time
I have yet to write and make my last rhyme
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Re: Your Words Bring My Heart To A Stop
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by blowfish_jane on
Sunday, 19th December 2004 @ 01:59:39 AM AEST
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DP this poem is so good, very poetically written. Theres tons of emotions on this piece. Cool write.
Hugs,
Jane x |
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Re: Your Words Bring My Heart To A Stop
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by Atari on
Sunday, 19th December 2004 @ 02:20:35 AM AEST
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I love it all. I feel it all, I imagine it all. It's like I am the person described. The pain feels so real But i've aslo been through these things before. So I know how it is. I love it so much Great poetry!
~Ariane |
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Re: Your Words Bring My Heart To A Stop
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by little_genna on
Sunday, 19th December 2004 @ 04:18:13 AM AEST
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Both of these poems are very good.
The first one is amazing...........
who is it about?
the second one just made me wanna cry for you.
you have talent to write so dont throw it away.
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Re: Your Words Bring My Heart To A Stop
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Sunday, 19th December 2004 @ 04:28:28 AM AEST
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| hey, the first poem was so beautiful and full of passion...i loved it.....and the second one, wow so painful.....and so raw. i know exactly how u feel and can almost feel ur pain with mine. well done, ur a great poet...cant wait to read the finished product |
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Re: Your Words Bring My Heart To A Stop
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by pixie on
Sunday, 19th December 2004 @ 06:40:42 AM AEST
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another write from your heart John, well done on this write, it was great ;)
pixie xx |
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Re: Your Words Bring My Heart To A Stop
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by witch_derna on
Sunday, 19th December 2004 @ 06:47:03 AM AEST
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I want to take you by the hand and kiss your broken skin.....
I love this poem it's so beautifully written :)
The second one is really good to. Hope you don't give up. I like reading your poems.
Blessed Be.
MaDonna |
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Re: Your Words Bring My Heart To A Stop
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by Broken_Skin on
Sunday, 19th December 2004 @ 07:05:46 AM AEST
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Oh my God, now my heart has stopped..
Oh my God...... |
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Re: Your Words Bring My Heart To A Stop
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by Broken_Skin on
Sunday, 19th December 2004 @ 07:31:50 AM AEST
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| I'm in shock.. |
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Re: Your Words Bring My Heart To A Stop
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 19th December 2004 @ 12:23:46 PM AEST
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| i didnt want to comment but if i do, at least you are getting some of the attention that you so clearly crave. poems that are as synthetic as this gives other peoples poems who are troubled and sincere little affect. |
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Re: Your Words Bring My Heart To A Stop
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by Gothchyk on
Thursday, 23rd December 2004 @ 12:45:42 AM AEST
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| Awesome write, it has left me speechless. |
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