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should i leave him?
Contributed by
blackholesun
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Sunday, 19th December 2004 @ 01:06:27 PM in AEST
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i love him,i think i love him too much,
i long for his touch even when he is screaming,i love to watch him while he is dreaming,
but i cant take it anymore im broken,there isnt one word ive left unspoken,
i tell him how i feel,all of this is so sureal.
i wish i could explain all this pain but im tired of thinking,
i sober my tears when i start drinking.
he hurts me so easilly,today he was looking at a girl,
he dont look at me anymore im not attractive i guess im his whore,
he says he loves me but his actions dont prove it,
im wandering if im too comfortably rooted.
im unhappy with him but im scared to go,
cause i love him too much,doesnt it show?
why would i stay,just to get turned away,
i dont feel happy i never can ,but i just cant leave my man,
i love him too much but im killing myself,
i wish that i had a friend to help,
i got no one to talk to,im all allone and im sick of this all,
i just want to wail and hit the wall,
he leaves me by myself sitting in tears,
is it gonna be this for the next ten years?
i cant handle him and he wont change,evrything is destroyed cant be re arranged.
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Re: should i leave him?
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 19th December 2004 @ 02:41:45 PM AEST
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Looks like your use to being neglected in your relationships hun,its not good for you either .You should go find some one who will treat you like their princess/queen to spoil and love you back.A relationship doesn't last with oneway love of words and showing.Both need to show each other they care.
The guy your talking about seems like a slimeball that goes after anything that moves.You deserve better then him. |
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Re: should i leave him?
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by pleasure_is_pain103 on
Sunday, 19th December 2004 @ 03:31:27 PM AEST
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| sometimes it is better for you to be alone and sad and depressed than in a relationship that is just hurting you. Your wasting the best emotion on someone who doesn't deserve it. i don't think you should put yourself through this, you have to know that you can find someone who will treat you like you deserve to be treated, good guys are out there and they will come to you one day, but they can't come to you if you waste your time with this guy! |
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Re: should i leave him?
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by faffeee on
Sunday, 19th December 2004 @ 03:35:17 PM AEST
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| like the rhythm of the poem, especially the first stanza. good write katie xx |
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Re: should i leave him?
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by autumngreeneyes on
Sunday, 19th December 2004 @ 04:33:51 PM AEST
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| stop thinking about it..pack and get out. even the Bible says it's better to dwell on the corner of a roof all by yourself then to have an abundance and be miserable..are you really nuts or just want us to think so..or just like writing this freak poetry???? |
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Re: should i leave him?
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by deadheadpoet on
Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 09:34:47 AM AEST
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| Brit how can you talk so badly about the one you say you love. You talk so bad about Peter making people think he's a slime ball. Your upset because you say he looked at another woman. You dress in such a way so men will look at you. So what's the problem? I say do us all a favor including Peter and leave him. Your just a kid and there are many more fish in the sea. Go fishing sister. Much peace in your journey. |
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