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Remaining Pain
Contributed by
sean88
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Sunday, 19th December 2004 @ 01:31:08 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I cant go on
It hurts like hell,
My heart is broke
I feel unwell,
The pain wont stop
And ceases to ease,
Its growing worse
Im getting worried,
I feel so alone
Although I do share,
They tried their best
But my heart doesnt repair,
Ive looked around
To help move on,
No-one comes near
As shes my icon,
I know its sad
I shouldnt care,
As you said before
Its going no-where,
I was just a crush
We never got far,
Never went out
Thats why its bizarre,
I should move on
As you have already,
But what I feel
Is remaining steady
Copyright ©
sean88
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2004-12-19 13:31:08]
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Re: Remaining Pain
(User Rating: 1 )
by Jishes_4_ever on
Sunday, 19th December 2004 @ 02:03:49 PM AEST
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great write... sorry about wut ur going through... hope u will be able to move on one day... maybe then u will c there r better things waiting for u... but i don't know... great write...
hope to c more from u soon
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Re: Remaining Pain
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by waos on
Wednesday, 19th January 2005 @ 06:42:16 PM AEST
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Feelings are tough... I liked the part where you said she was
your icon; and the part where you said "they tried their best /
but my heart doesn't repair"... I really felt that I can relate to that.
This brought out a lot of feelings in me and I thought you did a good
job putting your feelings out there.
~waos/kara |
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