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Vroommmmm
Contributed by
merry
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Sunday, 19th December 2004 @ 02:09:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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We fly past the crowds in a blur
Oblivious to the outside world
Cocooned in our sweet love
Excitement stirs
We talk for hours and hours
Walking hand in handconnected
We smile, we laugh, we understand
There is no beginning
There is no end
We exalt in each other
Happiness overflows
We glide on air
Vroommmmm vroommmmmm
We never stop
We dont slow down
I see us so clearly
Flying past the envious crowd
We take our happiness when we can
Knowing this is all there is
Copyright ©
merry
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2004-12-19 14:09:57]
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Re: Vroommmmm
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by surge_joebot on
Sunday, 19th December 2004 @ 02:14:47 PM AEST
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| that was very sweet, very good show of emotions :D i like it |
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Re: Vroommmmm
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by faffeee on
Sunday, 19th December 2004 @ 03:33:04 PM AEST
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| perfect description, very imaginative, takes me back to that happy place :) enjoy it katie xx |
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Re: Vroommmmm
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by lostinmyself on
Sunday, 19th December 2004 @ 04:24:17 PM AEST
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:) Awww, what a lovely poem.
It definately made me smile. It sort of reminds me of the beggining. The part where two people are so involved in each other that nothing else matters, and nothing else is seen. It's beautiful. Just like this poem.
Thanks for sharing.
Stunning write hun,
*hugs*
Phil xxx |
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Re: Vroommmmm
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by Spazzo on
Sunday, 20th February 2005 @ 01:00:12 AM AEST
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This is so sweet!
Scott |
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