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Contributed by
pleasure_is_pain103
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Sunday, 19th December 2004 @ 03:26:03 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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I look at you and I melt inside
In your hand is where my heart resides
I see you in every single thing I see
Why won't you take my hand and come with me?
When I gaze into your eyes I never want to look away
I want to be the one to hold you everyday
When I hear your voice my heart skips a beat
Without you near my life feels so incomplete
Just open up to me and say what's going on
Cause I have been patient with you for too long
What's holding me back from the things I want to say?
But what do I have to lose?
Since you're not mine anyway...
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2004-12-19 15:26:03]
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Re: you
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by lostinmyself on
Sunday, 19th December 2004 @ 04:10:40 PM AEST
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*kills school* lol
Ok, so the poem. I think this is lovely. I got the feeling that you were speaking about someone you were with for a moment, so the end got me a little.
But this is really sweet.
And go for it.
I can't offer anything constructive really. It's all good.
Great write.
*hugs* Phil xxx |
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Re: you
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by bebe20071 on
Sunday, 19th December 2004 @ 09:53:52 PM AEST
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| this peom is tigh. who ever gave you detention is lame. it's lovly and sweet. |
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Re: you
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by SweetRhythm on
Monday, 20th December 2004 @ 10:17:46 AM AEST
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Whoa that was sensational. Truly breathtaking. Forget detention, you should get an oscar. True loving words straight from the heart. Beautiful.
Great talent there.
Corinna |
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