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waiting on that bridge
Contributed by
ll
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Sunday, 19th December 2004 @ 04:09:51 PM in AEST
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Im standing on the bridge
Waiting for all who cared for me to come
I waited but they werent insight
I continue to stand there
It started to rain heavily
Looking down on those ducks
I see mother ducks looking out for its children
I looked around seeing happy couples running
I got really tired
So I bend down and sat
My arms wrapped around my legs
People seem to have not notice me
I searched for a face
But all I see is kids and their race
They got home wet
And soon got warmed up
I got wet but cant seem to be warmed
That doesnt matter though
What matters is obvious
Theyre not coming Ill just sit here
Till they do
But it will be the worse thing
That will happen to me
I dont need them anymore
All I need is this bridge
Just waiting on it
Slowly makes it a friend of mine
Copyright ©
ll
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2004-12-19 16:09:51]
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Re: waiting on that bridge
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by Stonedraider23 on
Sunday, 19th December 2004 @ 04:48:58 PM AEST
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| nice write who u waiting for and where is this bridge i'll gladly join you |
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Re: waiting on that bridge
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by MMISS on
Monday, 20th December 2004 @ 09:47:11 AM AEST
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i like this story. i felt like i was there watching you wait,lol
five stars for this one!!! |
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Re: waiting on that bridge
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 04:22:57 PM AEST
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Sad write.
Good poem. |
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Re: waiting on that bridge
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 16th August 2012 @ 07:05:22 AM AEST
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| Really nice poem. |
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