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Wasted Loss
Contributed by
crash
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Sunday, 19th December 2004 @ 06:26:33 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Wasted loss
in my short life,
I have lived too much
been at the point
I felt dead to the touch
I've been soo high
didn't know I could
my parents never said a word
they didn't think I would
i went to bed
with every woman I found
that natorious block
so many times I've gone round
now I am aging
my time is a year shorter
I look back
at my bad times
wondering
where was my mind?
thinking of all the time wasted,
where did it go?
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crash
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2004-12-19 18:26:33]
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Re: Wasted Loss
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by Chaos_is_apon_us on
Friday, 21st January 2005 @ 11:38:13 PM AEST
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Looking back on y year, I feel the same as you. Too much of this poem hits me on the mark, but I still like this. Too bad you arent writting anymore, but maybe your voice still shall be heard.
Better dayz
~jace~ |
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