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Lost
Contributed by
MnMnMsrcool
on
Sunday, 19th December 2004 @ 09:35:40 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Sat on the bed
and looked into your eyes
talked for hours
Don't know why
Our conversations
were pointless
and silly
I give anything
to be back there again
talking and laughing
and looking in your eyes
so cute
dimples by your mouth
only if i could act
on the feelings
I shouldn't have
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MnMnMsrcool
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2004-12-19 21:35:40]
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Re: Lost
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by frozenintime on
Sunday, 19th December 2004 @ 11:08:11 PM AEST
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| it's really good..but your comment that says help me write better..i've always written for myself..that makes me a lot happier than trying to impress someone else..keep it up cause there's nothing wrong with it |
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