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Self-contemptous Suicide
Contributed by
bopeep
on
Friday, 29th November 2002 @ 04:30:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Tears run down her cheeks,
As she wishses she could speak
To tell the world how she feels
Let them see as it slowly kills.
She wishes she could
She knows she should
But she fears,
She could not hold back the tears.
She closes her eyes,
Prepares for the fight.
Tears burning from within,
This war she cannot win.
They look at her with rage.
Wondering when she'll grow out of this stage.
They refuse to see, in fact they refuse to believe,
THat they had part in any of this.
They are the cause she cries herself to sleep
They are the reason she has become weak.
The tears have turned to blood.
Crimson red running down her arm.
Look at it burn on her skin,
Look at it flowing away.
From her tears you can look away
Now I ask you this:
Will you turn away now,
Now that the blood has stained the sheets.
Has stained the room in which she sit?
Copyright ©
bopeep
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2002-11-29 16:30:00]
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Re: Self-contemptous Suicide
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by nightrider on
Friday, 29th November 2002 @ 06:28:17 PM AEST
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| this is a good one. it is thought provoking, to me. it sounds a bit overly familiar for comfort, thanks for reminding me. |
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Re: Self-contemptous Suicide
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by OreO on
Friday, 29th November 2002 @ 09:50:33 PM AEST
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This sounds like my world.
Thanks for sharing this one i
enjoyed it alot. Keep em' coming
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::. |
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Re: Self-contemptous Suicide
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by wyrd_faerie on
Saturday, 30th November 2002 @ 03:00:22 PM AEST
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| this is so good, it's really really good, well done... |
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Re: Self-contemptous Suicide
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by orgygirl on
Sunday, 1st December 2002 @ 03:36:48 PM AEST
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I know this feeling all too well. You captured it wonderfully. It really hit home. Thanks for sharing.
Take care
R. |
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Re: Self-contemptous Suicide
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by frickinflamer on
Monday, 2nd December 2002 @ 01:44:26 AM AEST
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| love. you ARE an edgar allen poe! love the way you speak your mind and i hope you find your peace somewhere out there. its waiting for you. i found mine after two severe attemps... ya, and im still here! peachy i guess! so if i can do it, considering im an idiot... YO CAN TOO!!!!! but i like this one, you had passion and a rythem like a ... sadistic lullaby. hey, a new poek title! HAHA! well, i gotta go. post some more up will ya? im dying to read some more! |
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Re: Self-contemptous Suicide
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by frozensuicide on
Monday, 2nd December 2002 @ 12:15:51 PM AEST
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its fun. i know but... BAAAAAAD btu you do have a point about releasing the negativity.... my mom doesnt get it though so im too scared to tell her that i want too.... but sinse im stopping, you have too! hey! whoever stopps first should recieve like... 5 dollars from the other! or.. .something i dont know. but this is goooood i like the descriptive words! hehe!
hug a moose! |
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