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Area of Affect
Contributed by
stalkee
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Sunday, 19th December 2004 @ 11:51:35 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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It's thirty-six degrees
Sitting here, we're about to freeze
But then you speak and, by warmth, I am siezed
My caustic heart is caught in your kindled breeze
And when it's you and me
I'm emotionally on my knees
But don't let this stop, I don't want to be at ease
I love every moment of this so please
Won't you stay here with me
You make me feel like melting snow
And won't you stay here with me
So I will melt a little more
Affected everytime that I step into this area
The core of my being gets cloaked in flames
And then the light that shines from you dances through my eyes
Then just like that I diasscociate
You could stay here just awhile longer
And then, you know, you could watch me fail
'Cause my words would be much too feeble
and stupid for you to listen to
Copyright ©
stalkee
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2004-12-19 23:51:35]
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Re: Area of Affect
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 19th December 2004 @ 11:54:50 PM AEST
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| Excellent write. I like your style of writing. It's thought provoking. Great job. :-) |
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