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I asked you out
Contributed by
stonedraider23
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Sunday, 19th December 2004 @ 11:55:34 PM in AEST
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I asked you out
You love my favorite group
We're miles apart
How can this work
Well we can just love each other
Be true to one another
Hold each other when we cry
Cuddle when we're cold
The hands opened up the sky
You came from the light within
You're always on call
I'll wait till your not called on any more
I hope our trust will hold strong
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Re: I asked you out
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by Stalkee on
Sunday, 19th December 2004 @ 11:58:25 PM AEST
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this was really great...short and sweet...I hope things will go well for you and her!
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Re: I asked you out
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by Doriens_Picture on
Monday, 20th December 2004 @ 12:17:33 AM AEST
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I can relate coz i have someone i feel this way about
great write |
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Re: I asked you out
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by savedbydeath on
Tuesday, 21st December 2004 @ 12:05:27 AM AEST
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wow great write,yeah i know how u feel,i can most definitly relate to ya.theres this guy that i really like,well u might know him,his name is willie,but he lives very far and i've only seen pics,hes cute and funny and out going and out spoken,gee i cant wait for the day i meet him
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