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Contributed by
noid_schizoid
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Monday, 20th December 2004 @ 01:01:49 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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User, I knew you'd be back
Coursing through, it feels so, does it not?
Coursing through like a mile long
orgasm
like a ginger head train ride
Dumbass
up, been waiting
Slashing through, tear you, torn, pieces
Slashing through like a year old
cyclone
like a sludge primed felt pen
Crazy
demented, shoulda staied aweigh
You're through, death for you
You're through, sunshine funeral
procession
sunshine raincoat teardrop whimper
Copyright ©
noid_schizoid
... [
2004-12-20 01:01:49]
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Re: Relapse
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Monday, 20th December 2004 @ 02:10:39 AM AEST
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| wow, awesome!! well done!! |
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by bluebird on
Monday, 20th December 2004 @ 02:34:41 AM AEST
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this is wicked,well the poem is not the issue...
been down that road tryen to get off.
~keepthefaith~
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Re: Relapse
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by TaintedSoul on
Monday, 20th December 2004 @ 06:24:10 AM AEST
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Sometimes we must leave the path we walk to find a better one. The topic at hand is such a hard path to change. Nice purge.
peace
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