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You are the true beauty that flows in my veins
Contributed by
Doriens_Picture
on
Monday, 20th December 2004 @ 04:57:00 AM in AEST
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I dive like a bird deep into the ocean of your words
Looking for you my treasure my broken AngeL
I am falling into the deep chasms of your soul
Trying to find a way to bring out your wings
And I do find that way but then I wake up
And I am there looking into your eyes again
Looking into a pool of all the dreams I have ever had
And I feel you cast a spell on me bewitching me in every way
But you do not need a spell for I am yours and will not stray
I see your wings can you they wrap around me enveloping
Everything that I am and all these feelings are developing
Deep inside of me where no one has ever been to or has ever seen
But some how I feel you visited it once before and left your traces where you have been
I have seen you I know it I feel you understand who I am
But you are so beautiful to me how can you understand
Can you still feel my lips where I kissed you broken skin?
Can you still see my thoughts are you and you are in the words I spin?
What is this I am feeling it is something new to me, as If obsessed?
It feels so new to me so wonderful like a euphoric sensation I must confess
It is all you flowing through my veins making them over flow and spill out like blood Tainting this paper imbrued with the traces of you using the words you have made flood
I can see you in your words can you see me in mine
If you look deep enough you will see that it is you who is behind
All the beauty that you read and all the things that your heart feels
It is you who is inside my words making them come to life as if they were real
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Re: You are the true beauty that flows in my veins
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by pixie on
Monday, 20th December 2004 @ 11:53:05 AM AEST
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a very beautiful writem I love your writes John, please dont ever stop writing
love pix xx |
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Re: You are the true beauty that flows in my veins
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by little_genna on
Monday, 20th December 2004 @ 05:01:32 PM AEST
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| amazing.......i cant think of anything else that will do justice to such a great write..... |
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Re: You are the true beauty that flows in my veins
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by Gothchyk on
Tuesday, 21st December 2004 @ 12:55:00 AM AEST
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| Wow great write, I'm glad that I read this one. |
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Re: You are the true beauty that flows in my veins
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by Essentially9 on
Thursday, 23rd December 2004 @ 05:32:05 PM AEST
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| excellent poem. very nice rhymes. and written well. i think this is one of your better insomniac poems. |
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