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time glass
Contributed by
Jan_Oskar_Hansen
on
Friday, 29th November 2002 @ 08:30:00 PM in AEST
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Time Glass
Snow, like frosted cornflakes fell
slowly to the ground. Look! Snow!
It hasnt snowed here since 1932
an ancient farmhand said, as a flake
fell into his open palm and quickly
disappeared into his nut-brown skin.
Toothless he laughed and in dimmed
eyes forgotten youth danced.
Ah, transience my love, beauty never
lasts, but leaves me something I ought
to remember.
Sun came and in an instant the idyllic
winter scene vanished, evergreen
bushes shook themselves as did weed
along whitewashed walls. Yes, I have
to send mother a Christmas card, not
of snow but of the landscape where
December flowers bloom and every
drop of dew, on the outer field, briefly
carry the nucleus of a holy rainbow.
Copyright ©
Jan_Oskar_Hansen
... [
2002-11-29 20:30:00]
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Re: time glass
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by chrissypooh on
Saturday, 30th November 2002 @ 04:09:41 PM AEST
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It's a little long and confusing, but it is very good!! I like it!!
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Re: time glass
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by CARAAAAA on
Tuesday, 3rd December 2002 @ 10:22:23 AM AEST
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| havent been here in a while but its really good to read ur poems they always procure these certain feels abbt them |
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