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alone
Contributed by
Hannah_Heaven
on
Monday, 20th December 2004 @ 04:34:11 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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in this world i 'live'
in this world i'll die alone
iam half dead
my body yearning for those gates so bright
as i walk alone
i breathe alone
i love alone
my thoughts of nothing
rest apon the existence of no-one
i open my eyes
half dead iam
and i see the couples
part of me cries
part of me dies
and i dont know
was i ment to be alone
do i belong in this world
is there someone for me
iam dying inside
i need answers
i need hope
i need to be togetha
not a loner in love
i need double
i need love...
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2004-12-20 16:34:11]
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Re: alone
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 17th March 2005 @ 07:17:32 PM AEST
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Hannah,
You must first love urself before anyone can find you loveable if you are just living to die you are not loving urself. If you made lemonad on a very hot die and were to make a lemonade stand, and proclaim I am thirsty and its too hot, Do you think if your costimers
saw you thirsty and that you wouldent take a dink of your own lemonade do you honestly believe that they would still buy some and drink it. If you cannot first Love urself enough to start to live, you wont find that someone who is going to find you wantable,
And also no you would not see thoughs pearly gates. God says not to hide ur light under a bushle let it shine. You have a beautiful light inside of you that you just arent letting out, you not letting that light be seen. That light inside you may just be the thing to heal someone elses heart, and God expects us as human beings to share our light and to live our life, you cant expect to get to heaven and live a wonderful life thier, if you cant come to first enjoy the small things God gives you in this life.
Good luck, I know you can!
If you can write like that you can do anything!!!! |
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