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Suffering
Contributed by
poet_of_anger
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Monday, 20th December 2004 @ 06:14:42 PM in AEST
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I (x3)
I have lost hope
I, am alone
I, have no home
I, have lost hope
I, am alone
All, that I see
Makes, my heart bleed
Please, someone intervene
I, don't want to see
Can, there be a way
To, get out of this place
I, am lost and confused
I, don't know what to do
I, am alone
I, am scared
I, want a home
I, am tired of fear
I, see your pain
It's, driving me insane
Is, there a way
I, can escape
I (x3)
I have lost hope
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Re: Suffering
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by neglected1 on
Monday, 20th December 2004 @ 06:32:21 PM AEST
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ouch... this is very saddening to me... but you write so well... very unique... i like the repeats.. it makes for a more dramatic effect..
wonderful write
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