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The Wrinkled Heart
Contributed by
Baby_Grl
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Monday, 20th December 2004 @ 07:10:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Everyone is born with a perfect heart,
But every hurt feeling brings a start,
To a wrinkle in that perfect heart.
So with every comment that is mean,
Like "you are ugly, fat, or lean."
A wrinkle is creased into your heart.
A torn heart will never heal.
Here is the deal.
Think about how you would feel.
Consider your part.
Do not cause a broken heart.
Copyright ©
Baby_Grl
... [
2004-12-20 19:10:25]
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Re: The Wrinkled Heart
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by n2dep2care on
Monday, 20th December 2004 @ 07:19:55 PM AEST
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Very simple, yet says a lot! Very nice.
Laurie |
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Re: The Wrinkled Heart
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by redtempest13 on
Monday, 20th December 2004 @ 07:21:58 PM AEST
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| Great write. And true. |
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