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Deadly eyes
Contributed by
blacksabbath026
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Monday, 20th December 2004 @ 10:25:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Intoxicating, Your eyes were
I fell in love with you, instantly
The first time i looked into your eyes
I got hopelessy lost
Maybe one day ill find where i am
I lost myself on the rock
When i Squeezed your hand
You kissed me, you stole my soul
Somehow it was worth it
Somehow, your love was worth more
Infinitly more than my soul
I wish it never ended,
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2004-12-20 22:25:58]
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Re: Deadly eyes
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 20th December 2004 @ 10:34:12 PM AEST
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| This is so lovely. great write! :-) |
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Re: Deadly eyes
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by blowfish_jane on
Tuesday, 21st December 2004 @ 02:20:33 AM AEST
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Ohh now this is what i call romantic, you have such a way with your words. I love the way you composed this piece. Great write.
Hugs,
Jane x |
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