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I BEG OF YOU
Contributed by
pUnKa_RaCh
on
Monday, 20th December 2004 @ 11:30:06 PM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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Please dont make me mourn you
Please dont make me wait
To be without you
Cannot be my eternal fate
Please dont turn away
Please dont turn to her
I watch you abandon me
As the darkness begins to stir
Please dont tell her you love her
Please dont kiss her in front of me
I cannot bear to look
It torments my eyes to see
Please dont ignore your wrong
Please dont ignore me as I bleed
You gave me all the blame
But somehow youre all I need
Please dont act so self assured
Please dont act like this is a game
Because Im left empty
My life will never be the same
Please dont regret me
Please dont regret my kiss
Nothing could ever live up
To those moments that I miss
Please dont discard that night
Please dont discard my hurt
Cutting my heart in two
Then burying it in the dirt
Please dont forget me
Please dont forget my worth
Ill always remember you
Even though the despair begins to birth
Please say that you care
Please say your heartfelt farewell
As our souls drift apart
And in my loneliness I shall dwell
Please give me one last smile
Please give me my peace of mind
As I long for sought-after solace
From this heartbreak I have been assigned
Please come stand beside me
Please come back and be mine
Do you love me like I love you?
Please
Give me any sign..
Copyright ©
pUnKa_RaCh
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2004-12-20 23:30:06]
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Re: I BEG OF YOU
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by savedbydeath on
Monday, 20th December 2004 @ 11:39:39 PM AEST
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sad but really good write,full of over powered emotions,keep it up ur a good 1
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Re: I BEG OF YOU
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by surge_joebot on
Monday, 20th December 2004 @ 11:41:31 PM AEST
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wow this is really good, you paint a lovely picture (well not lovely but you know) with your words... it flows well and the repition isnt too annoying, you did good :D i like it and i can relate i specialy like
"Please don’t discard that night
Please don’t discard my hurt
Cutting my heart in two
Then burying it in the dirt
Please don’t forget me
Please don’t forget my worth
I’ll always remember you"
That bits my fave, it should be song lyrics :D
thankyou for sharing
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Re: I BEG OF YOU
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 21st December 2004 @ 12:36:21 AM AEST
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I can somewhat relate, I like the part were u wrote
Please don’t tell her you love her
Please don’t kiss her in front of me
I cannot bear to look
It torments my eyes to see
Please don’t ignore your wrong
Please don’t ignore me as I bleed
You gave me all the blame
But somehow you’re all I need
I can really relate the that well, Great Write, Full of beatiful and sad emotions! |
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Re: I BEG OF YOU
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by blowfish_jane on
Tuesday, 21st December 2004 @ 01:55:51 AM AEST
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Ohh i know what you so mean by this, i used to feel like this about a guy. This is such a nice write showing your inner feelings, 5/5.
Hugs,
Jane x |
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Re: I BEG OF YOU
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by Doriens_Picture on
Tuesday, 21st December 2004 @ 02:09:21 AM AEST
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Please don’t make me mourn you
Please don’t make me wait
To be without you
Cannot be my eternal fate
Please don’t turn away
Please don’t turn to her
I watch you abandon me
As the darkness begins to stir
i like those lines very much
i have no idea how someone could ever let you go
or how any one can be better than you from what i see in your words |
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