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Failed
Contributed by
Dominus
on
Monday, 20th December 2004 @ 11:35:50 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Bring me shame and set it loose
So around my neck still sits a noose
From when I sat alone
Remove your eyes from my darkened soul
For I in time will pay my toll
I do not need your pity
Have you ever seen me looking sad?
Or sitting staring, looking mad?
I must learn that these are simple things
So again I have failed.
And into my coffin lid Ive nailed
My last breath of sanity
Why worry how or why they do it
A fickle mind with a line straight through it
Its so hard to think for myself
As a flower without a purpose
A flower without a stem
Ive fallen down and broken and became one of them
A Dullard
Copyright ©
Dominus
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2004-12-20 23:35:50]
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Re: Failed
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by blackmarker on
Monday, 20th December 2004 @ 11:37:41 PM AEST
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Nicely done.
I really like this part...
And into my coffin lid I’ve nailed
My last breath of sanity.
Good job! |
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Re: Failed
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Tuesday, 21st December 2004 @ 01:01:37 AM AEST
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| wow, sad and yet dark. i love it. take care |
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Re: Failed
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by bluebird on
Tuesday, 21st December 2004 @ 01:25:59 AM AEST
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this is so awesome and powerful!
~keep the faith~
BB |
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Re: Failed
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by Gothchyk on
Tuesday, 21st December 2004 @ 01:36:15 AM AEST
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Great write.
Broken flowers among nails holding still the cover to ones darkened soul. Sounds beautiful and yet full of pain.
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