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Truth
Contributed by
sean88
on
Tuesday, 21st December 2004 @ 12:19:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Tired awakening
Of an untamed soul,
Its contrasting rage
Creates a hellhole,
It lay asleep
Untouched for years,
Until the terror starts
And raises fears,
People run
Too afraid to stay,
Whilst others scream
And look in dismay,
Its actions are bold
And especially clear,
It frightens the people
By being sincere,
For all this time
Its been locked inside,
About to erupt
And cause a landslide,
Then when you get trapped
Theres no way out,
The truth can hurt
Dont mess it about,
But its best its free
No longer caged,
Itll be better
No longer enraged
Copyright ©
sean88
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2004-12-21 12:19:19]
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Re: Truth
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by autumngreeneyes on
Tuesday, 21st December 2004 @ 12:24:18 PM AEST
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yes, the truth, though sometimes hurtful..and hard to deal with is always best. I hate going to my psych and messing around with all that talk..the truth often hurts..
good job. |
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Re: Truth
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by Red_October on
Tuesday, 21st December 2004 @ 12:31:32 PM AEST
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| This definitely flows well, a well expressed version of wisdom. Excellent. Tiffany J. (Red_October) |
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Re: Truth
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by kt88 on
Thursday, 23rd December 2004 @ 01:49:48 PM AEST
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| sometimes yes the truth does hurt. sometimes it hurts so much you do want to beleive it. this is very good |
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