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look into the mirror
Contributed by
tractorbabe
on
Tuesday, 21st December 2004 @ 07:40:01 PM in AEST
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oops
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just look in the mirror
tell me what you see
who is this girl
looking back at me
where is this picture
now looking in the past
tell me what you see
inside reflctive glass
try and help me find
the picture thats unseen
help me understand
why my soals no longer clean
look into my eyes
try to say that nothings rong
never understand
never wanting to be alone
look once again
look into the mirror
look into your soal
untill you find your tear
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Re: look into the mirror
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by EverlastingDawn on
Tuesday, 21st December 2004 @ 07:44:47 PM AEST
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| Wow. I really like it. I sorta reminds me of that song in Mulan. I tried to write a poem like this, once. It was really bad. The emotions you expressed are phenomenal. Though did you mean soul, when you wrote soal? Overall I think it's a great poem. |
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Re: look into the mirror
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by Spazzo on
Tuesday, 21st December 2004 @ 07:48:56 PM AEST
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This seems sad, if you need to talk just pm me. Great write too.
Spazzo |
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Re: look into the mirror
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by autumngreeneyes on
Tuesday, 21st December 2004 @ 08:11:17 PM AEST
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| good job..I was going to say I think you might have meant soul..but someone beat me to it..I wonder why the mods aren't working on the spelling? hmm. |
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Re: look into the mirror
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by Unspoken_Love on
Wednesday, 22nd December 2004 @ 09:57:04 PM AEST
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| I think this is a great poem, it's so easy to relate to. you really know how to express your feelings in words.. Good Job! |
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Re: look into the mirror
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 28th December 2004 @ 10:30:41 PM AEST
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This is really good. I also see something sad in it though.
Nonetheless, great write. |
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