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I am fading, my star is fading
Contributed by
xFaLLeNxFaRiEx
on
Tuesday, 21st December 2004 @ 08:34:20 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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The starry nights, the raining eyes.
My thoughts, my tears fly out from lies.
I am broken, I am lost.
I am fading, my star is fading.
Fading into myself for months at a time.
I am hidden, and drifted off to sea in a slash of wind.
All the sin, all the tears.
This must end.
I can't take anymore.
Can't take anymore of punching my fist through walls.
The blood dripping from me emotionally.
I feel so used, and dark hearted.
I'm rising under the arch.
The room is spinning as I try to run, as I try to keep my balance, but I fall into the walls, and fall apart.
I'm sick of screaming, sick of lying,sick of crying.
I just want to sleep.
Just want to dream.
Just want to find myself.
Don't want to be broken as I walk down the halls.
Surrounding me are walls that tuck me in, and keep me from reality.
These cries are eccentric.
They are everywhere, all over my body.
The water from my eyes.
Like a waterfall.
This is me.
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xFaLLeNxFaRiEx
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2004-12-21 20:34:20]
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Re: I am fading, my star is fading
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by TheVoice on
Tuesday, 21st December 2004 @ 09:21:18 PM AEST
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very deep emotional write.
the voice
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Re: I am fading, my star is fading
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Wednesday, 22nd December 2004 @ 01:30:48 AM AEST
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| very beautiful...i can feel ur pain and am going through a similar ordeal...we all feel the same sometimes....nice write....excellent |
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Re: I am fading, my star is fading
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 12:24:56 AM AEST
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| Great write. I hope you post more poems. I look forward to reading more from you. |
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