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in the news today
Contributed by
surge_joebot
on
Tuesday, 21st December 2004 @ 08:43:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
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In the news today...
A girls been crying.
Her daddy hit her...
Maybe she meant for him to.
In the news today...
The girl ran away.
Because she couldn't stand it.
Now she sleeps in a ditch.
In the news today...
This girl is a crack addict.
She'll do anything for another hit.
She still sleeps in a ditch.
In the news today...
That girl went crazy...
And held up a petrol station...
Got killed in the gun fire.
In the news today...
A girl is now dead.
Perhaps she'd still be here...
If her dad hugged her instead of hit her.
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2004-12-21 20:43:18]
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Re: in the news today
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by lakitkat on
Wednesday, 22nd December 2004 @ 01:45:50 AM AEST
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| This was a powerful poem, with a lot of truth for some people in it. You got your message across very well. I enjoyed reading the poem. I hope to read more from you. |
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Re: in the news today
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Wednesday, 22nd December 2004 @ 08:59:37 AM AEST
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Very powerfull! But it is the truth and the message that you tried to get through is very true. Great poem. Very well written.
~ :: christina :: ~ |
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