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Life is liek a roller Coaster
Contributed by
Lauryen
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Tuesday, 21st December 2004 @ 10:37:43 PM in AEST
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Lifepoems
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Life is like a roller coaster
full of twist and turns
Lots of laughs and tears
Full of stings and burns
Having to hold on
When things go wrong and is not right
Lots of going upside down
But everything always ends up right
Rising and falling
Always confused
Not knowing which way to turn
Not knwoing what to do.
Screaming and yelling
Having fun
Arms up high
Having no where to run
Life if like a roller coaster
Full of twist and turns
so many ups and downs
But yet still so much to learn.
Copyright ©
Lauryen
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2004-12-21 22:37:43]
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Re: Life is liek a roller Coaster
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 21st December 2004 @ 11:13:40 PM AEST
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| Nice poem. It sends out a good message of hope and positivity towards the future. I enjoyed it. |
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Re: Life is liek a roller Coaster
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by bluebird on
Tuesday, 21st December 2004 @ 11:20:02 PM AEST
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I like the rhythm pattern who have all the way through it it helped tie everythign together and acutally made it seem more of a pleasant poem.
Thanks.
~keep the faith~
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Re: Life is liek a roller Coaster
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by girish on
Wednesday, 22nd December 2004 @ 03:01:05 AM AEST
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Life is Natural
The way we live is artificial
nice write
read my poems on life
girish
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