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Hollow Dreams
Contributed by
Mortis-Dark
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Wednesday, 22nd December 2004 @ 08:28:25 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Only to me.
Everything I see will never be.
This repenting dream keeps reappearing to me.
Only a ghost inside a dream.
When one never truly knows the means.
Water spills from its empty cup.
Only to fill these hollow dreams.
To drowned me at the core.
To spoil all that we know.
These are the things that will never show.
In the wind against the snow.
Only to know that nothing means something.
But really nothing at all.
So when the waves crash.
Yet crash if they may.
Let this be my way of thanking you.
Let this be my last will and testement.
Copyright ©
Mortis-Dark
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2004-12-22 08:28:25]
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Re: Hollow Dreams
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by pixie on
Wednesday, 22nd December 2004 @ 08:29:38 AM AEST
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very emotional and dark, very well written,
pixie xx |
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Re: Hollow Dreams
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by TaintedSoul on
Wednesday, 22nd December 2004 @ 08:45:56 AM AEST
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Tragic write you've penned Mortis. The emotional turmoil in the words casts light upon the shadows which devour many souls.
peace
TS |
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Re: Hollow Dreams
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Wednesday, 22nd December 2004 @ 08:53:04 AM AEST
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Dark and emotional. Very well written. great write.
~ :: christina :: ~ |
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Re: Hollow Dreams
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by tractorbabe on
Wednesday, 22nd December 2004 @ 10:20:03 AM AEST
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| very emotioanal ..very good poem i like it |
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Re: Hollow Dreams
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by One on
Wednesday, 22nd December 2004 @ 12:03:56 PM AEST
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| hollow dreams, a very good poem |
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