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Hug My Soul
Contributed by
pixie
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Wednesday, 22nd December 2004 @ 08:54:11 AM in AEST
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Please my love hug my soul,
At this time of year it has gone cold,
Wrap it up inside your covers,
Hold me like you want no other.
My soul is covered in white snow,
Give me your love & make me glow,
Hold me to you close to your chest,
Lets sleep together let us just rest.
Touch me with your soft skin,
Give me the loving deep within,
Your cuddles are like that of a teddy bear,
I can fall fast asleep in your stare.
Soul shivers when youre not around,
It lays alone & frozen on the ground,
It becomes frosty at this time of year,
All it cries are icicles of tears.
I see your love as my souls scarf,
To me you are my other half,
So my love please hug my soul,
Keep it from feeling the winters cold.
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pixie
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2004-12-22 08:54:11]
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Re: Hug My Soul
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by TaintedSoul on
Wednesday, 22nd December 2004 @ 08:59:21 AM AEST
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Winter is not only part of nature but part of our souls as well, especially when we feel forlorn. Beautiful cry pixie
peace
TS |
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Re: Hug My Soul
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 22nd December 2004 @ 09:39:49 AM AEST
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I agree. Beautiful plea Pixie. "icicles of tears" I never thought of them that way, but it fits.
Cheers!
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Re: Hug My Soul
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by Bruce on
Wednesday, 22nd December 2004 @ 10:26:06 AM AEST
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| keep them coming, fits you well. lovely write |
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Re: Hug My Soul
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 22nd December 2004 @ 10:32:08 AM AEST
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Pixie this is just warm and so romantic very beautiful
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Re: Hug My Soul
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by Dominus on
Wednesday, 22nd December 2004 @ 11:46:48 AM AEST
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So called with the winter yet so warm with the love.
Wonderfull |
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Re: Hug My Soul
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by autumngreeneyes on
Wednesday, 22nd December 2004 @ 11:47:02 AM AEST
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odd, Pixilator..I just wrote a poem about my heart being covered with a layer of snow.. we must think alike..or maybe we have the same muse..My soul is cold too...
great word paint.. |
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Re: Hug My Soul
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by Evilnn on
Wednesday, 22nd December 2004 @ 01:12:31 PM AEST
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Very touching poem
I really enjoyed it
Beautiful
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Re: Hug My Soul
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by blowfish_jane on
Wednesday, 22nd December 2004 @ 01:47:02 PM AEST
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Pix this is such a great write, showing such strength on writing such an emotional poem. Keep them coming.
Hugs,
Jane |
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Re: Hug My Soul
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 22nd December 2004 @ 02:22:00 PM AEST
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| Cute write and a warm message...........Mike |
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