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The Sent Of The Ocean
Contributed by
ShadowsCloud
on
Saturday, 30th November 2002 @ 11:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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She closes her eyes on
A warm summer's eve
And lifting her face feels
The coolness of a cleansing breeze
As the sweet melody of the ocean
Plays softly in her ears
She hums to its tune
But tastes the loneliness of her tears
While the sun kisses her face
She smiles to her dreams
Reaching out she touches
Where her heart yearns to be
The face of an angel,
The song of a bird,
The delicacy of life,
The feel of the breeze,
The sent of the ocean...
When I close my eyes
And think of you
All of these things
You bring to me
Copyright ©
ShadowsCloud
... [
2002-11-30 11:00:00]
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Re: The Sent Of The Ocean
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by OreO on
Saturday, 30th November 2002 @ 02:42:33 PM AEST
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Bravo, Beautifully written.
I really enjoyed this one it gives
such a beautiful vision. Thanks
for sharing this one. Keep em' coming
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::. |
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Re: The Sent Of The Ocean
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by Sexygirl on
Saturday, 30th November 2002 @ 09:10:16 PM AEST
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| That was really nice...well done.. |
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Re: The Sent Of The Ocean
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by Unaekseveer1 on
Wednesday, 11th December 2002 @ 08:45:05 PM AEST
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A beautiful vision Candice,
I like this very much. It's lonely feeling is full of hope and very well describes how it feels to be in love with a dream which was actually a reality!
With love
Dean;-) |
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Re: The Sent Of The Ocean
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by ShadowsCloud on
Wednesday, 11th December 2002 @ 09:11:04 PM AEST
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Dean, I think this is my favorite poem that I have written about Shadow. If only it were as easy to tell him how I feel as it is for me to write about it.
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Re: The Sent Of The Ocean
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by Unaekseveer1 on
Wednesday, 11th December 2002 @ 09:33:39 PM AEST
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Why does life seem to be littered with if only's Candice?
I'm sure you will soon. Believe me, I'm an expert in having absolutely no idea about these things!!Hehehe
With love
Dean:-) |
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Re: The Sent Of The Ocean
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by ShadowsCloud on
Wednesday, 11th December 2002 @ 09:52:19 PM AEST
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Dean, I don't know why we go through life saying if only, but I know that I do it all the time.
I came very close to telling him the other day but I backed out at the last minute. I don't know why but i just changed my mind, maybe i wasn't really ready.
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