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a final smile
Contributed by
vampyrekiss
on
Wednesday, 22nd December 2004 @ 05:33:26 PM in AEST
Topic:
psychoticpoems
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i could never make you smile
and now in death
i can make you smile
with this knife in my hand
i start to work
craving up your face
like a jack-o-latren
till finaly
across your face
is a bright red smile
and i will always know
that i made you smile
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Re: a final smile
(User Rating: 1 )
by BabyFacedAngel2010 on
Wednesday, 22nd December 2004 @ 10:10:55 PM AEST
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Thats not pycotic its cute I wish I could do that sometimes but it wouldnt be a smile cause noone would see it...if you ceach my drift lolz
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Re: a final smile
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Thursday, 30th December 2004 @ 01:16:58 AM AEST
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| haha awesome i love it!!! |
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