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untitled
Contributed by
bebe20071
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Wednesday, 22nd December 2004 @ 06:33:21 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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before you won't even talk to me
and now you can't wait to see me
before i was just a girl
but now i mean your world
what happend over night
why things are just turning right
i am happy that you finally love me
and everything seem like we're meant to be
that what i wanted all my life
but a world change from sad to happy in one night isn't right
i am sorry to say
i can't trust the one i love today
how do i know if it isn't a trick
from a person that is so sick
there is nothing for me do
until the truth is what i know
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Re: untitled
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by PhantomVampyress on
Wednesday, 22nd December 2004 @ 08:37:36 PM AEST
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well first i wanted to say awesome write and great expression.. you sound like your confused.. i wouldn't say this isn't right.. it just may be.. there may be no games at all.. its probably you just being scared but i can relate.. i felt that way too about my current love and he really loved me so i mean its probably you just being scared
peace and hope
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