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The Raven Memories
Contributed by
taintedsoul
on
Wednesday, 22nd December 2004 @ 09:52:15 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Haunting memories that resurface
with a vengeance
even after years of hibernation.
Its been sixteen years, two months,
six days and three hours since they
had to say goodbye
but whos counting time.
One might say it was a Romeo
and Juliet situation
but both still wander this earth, alive.
At least, she hopes he is still
within this realm.
Where did the raven go, the one
with the pale blue eyes
lost to her throughout time, forced to say goodbye.
Many regrets fill her life,
but the one which raises its
head from time to time
when she should have gone by.
Its been thirteen years, two months
and six days since the phone call
came
no, shes not counting the days.
She still sits and wonders why she never
stopped in
only passed by in hopes of a glimpse of who sits inside.
No, she doesnt count the days and hope
that the phone rings again. Nor does she
reach out in hopes that he might hear
her calling to him
whispering her apologies to the wind.
Where did the raven go after all this time?
She whispers to the night.
11 July 2004
Copyright ©
taintedsoul
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2004-12-22 21:52:15]
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Re: The Raven Memories
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by blueeyedevil13 on
Wednesday, 22nd December 2004 @ 09:57:23 PM AEST
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so sad..
it makes me wonder what really happened and who would do such a cruel thing to spilt up such love...
it made me feel the hole inside my own soul.. excellent write.
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Re: The Raven Memories
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by Mangs on
Thursday, 23rd December 2004 @ 12:54:24 PM AEST
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beautiful poem.....loved it so much
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Re: The Raven Memories
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 23rd December 2004 @ 06:21:08 PM AEST
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| This is so sad...Thinking about the days past and longing to regain what was lost is devastating to go though. Great poem. |
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