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Your pain has yet to start
Contributed by
blacksabbath026
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Thursday, 23rd December 2004 @ 12:59:33 AM in AEST
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As i rise from the dead, i have but one thought
Revenge, revenge on the one who sent me to hell
As i seek you, grasping my knife
I think how sweet your blood will taste
I finally find you, I start to laugh
You see me and run in horror
You know its no use, you know your fate
You can hear me chasing you as you start to cry
You make your final mistake, i see my chance
As you trip i catch you and inflict the first wound
You lose consiousceness, sad thing is
You are only knocked out, your pain has yet to start
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Re: Your pain has yet to start
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by LEMMEN on
Thursday, 23rd December 2004 @ 01:04:52 AM AEST
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Interesting write.
~DENNIS~ |
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Re: Your pain has yet to start
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by spirit_of_dark_tears on
Thursday, 23rd December 2004 @ 01:35:24 AM AEST
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i feel the same thing feel my steal stealer of souls
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Re: Your pain has yet to start
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by Adriean on
Thursday, 23rd December 2004 @ 01:59:18 AM AEST
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| The funny thing is, that I've written quite a few like that myself . Wierd how inside we can think the same, but on the outside be so judgemental of others because they say and do the things we only wish we could say and do our selves. VERY well written. Actually, If you don't mind would you check out some of mine and tell me what you think? |
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Re: Your pain has yet to start
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by Loyalist on
Thursday, 23rd December 2004 @ 02:43:49 AM AEST
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| Sick? Yes. Sadistic? Yes. Don't get me wrong, I like it. Keep writing your feelings and, but don't forget the love as well. Thanks for reading my opinion. |
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Re: Your pain has yet to start
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by LevyMetal on
Thursday, 23rd December 2004 @ 04:19:07 PM AEST
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| *guitar solo* Most of your work reminds me of black metal songs. lol I love it...Lets add a bridge and some backround vocals and get this thing started. =) |
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