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Wheres your love?
Contributed by
sick_n_twisted
on
Thursday, 23rd December 2004 @ 02:43:07 AM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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She waits all day long for you
She gets dressed to impress
Its the things you do
That makes her depressed
That makes you untrue
You promise her something
That you didnt do
You treat her like your slave while your her king
She cant do anything shes attached to you
Over you she cries and cries
She knows about the cheats and lies
She stays home cooks,cleans and keeps the kids
Gambling,Drinking you know she forbids
Why cant you just be good?
Are you just like that or missunderstood
Smarten up or you'll lose her
Or just go out and be a boozer
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2004-12-23 02:43:07]
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Re: Wheres your love?
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by Loyalist on
Thursday, 23rd December 2004 @ 02:52:57 AM AEST
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| I was initially thinking that you were gonna write about how your mom and dad just don;t understand or that sort of thing, but I must say I was quite impressed about the honesty and feelings you invoked. Quite a bit of suprise and a very very good write. Thank you for reading my opinion. |
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