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Heart Torn
Contributed by
bluebird
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Thursday, 23rd December 2004 @ 03:06:48 AM in AEST
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White trash, black trash I dont see teh difference anymore both the same kind of mind blood shedin and heart torn
Keep on talken i dont a thing your mouth is moven but i dont hear anythin. My minds gone blank from the screamin of my heart, ears are bloody ringin but dont stop the screamin of my heart.
We're all invisible, just like the howlen wind seein what we wanna see neva given in. Standen up for what we bleieve in, isnt that our right but innocence is dyin coz of us in the middle of the night.
Your liven in the old days complainen bout the art but you cant move onto the future if you cant let go of the past
Keep on talken I dont hear a thing your mouth is moven but i dont herar anythin. My minds gone blank fromthe screamin of my heart Ears are bloody ringin but dont stop the screamin of my heart.
I want out wanna throw it all awa. Things ive done I cant take back i know ive got to pay. i wanna forget about that and throw it all away, but you wont let me, no,you wont let me.
Your holdin onto me with every mistake I make so i think its time i break loose and go my seperate way. My past is me i regret what ive become but as you always say everythin can come undone.
Keep on talken I dont hear a thing your mouth is moven but i dont hear anythin My minds gone blank from the screamin of my heart ears are bloody ringing but dont stop the screamin of my heart.
Things ive done I cant take back I know ive got to pay. i wanna forget about that and throw it all away, but you wont let me, no, you wont let me. but im not listenin anymore.
You hear me!im not listenin anymore!
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Re: Heart Torn
(User Rating: 1 ) by Loyalist on
Thursday, 23rd December 2004 @ 03:16:35 AM AEST (User
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It is good indeed. I wish I could hear it set to music as it would give that much more of an impact. I really liked the line,
"You hear me!im not listenin anymore!"
Very interesting idea using "hear me" versus "I'm not listening". Very kewl! Thank you for reading my opinion. |
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Re: Heart Torn
(User Rating: 1 ) by sick_n_twisted on
Thursday, 23rd December 2004 @ 03:26:19 AM AEST (User
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Yea real cool poem and i too would wanna hear it in music that'd be awsome |
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Re: Heart Torn
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Thursday, 23rd December 2004 @ 03:28:09 AM AEST (User
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although im not into your kinda music i think the lyrics raise some intresting points and i especially like the verse "your liven in the old days...." |
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Re: Heart Torn
(User Rating: 1 ) by Gothchyk on
Friday, 24th December 2004 @ 01:59:23 AM AEST (User
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Great song, I love korn. You did a very good job. |
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