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passion
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doc
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Friday, 19th July 2002 @ 10:02:34 PM in AEST
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the ebb and flow of this ocean
surrounding me,consumes my waking being
thy waves of love lap at my soul in
ever-rising surges......
so high the tides of erotic delight
that one can scarce a breath release
to swell the seas of thy passion
so high,that i may drown me in you
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Re: passion
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by chatabox on
Friday, 19th July 2002 @ 10:09:42 PM AEST
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oooo, I would love to paddle in this ocean.
What a sensual write, I loved it. |
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Re: passion
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by Chrissie on
Saturday, 20th July 2002 @ 03:24:41 AM AEST
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This is a stunning piece...looking forward to reading more from you.
Chrissie |
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Re: passion
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Saturday, 20th July 2002 @ 06:34:17 AM AEST
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What's up, Doc?? Welcome to ypdc. I enjoyed this very much. I love the sea and the images you conjured up in my mind were amazing. I look forward to reading more of your stuff? p/s Do you play the guitar?? lol....
Jenni |
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Re: passion
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by Rose on
Sunday, 21st July 2002 @ 05:05:28 AM AEST
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This was an intense write for sure. It makes you want to be with that one to help you explore your ocean. wonderful write.
welcome to YPDC
Amber Rose :) |
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Re: passion
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by Bizzy on
Tuesday, 18th February 2003 @ 04:33:52 PM AEST
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| Dear Doc, Passion is a very beautifully written poem. I see that you are a musician, too. Wonderful! My oldest son is nearly your age, a creative soul, now writing a novel. My youngest son is a musician-composer-vocalist, doing quite well on the west coast, so I know what pleasures and courage this creativeness demands of you. God bless you to do great things! Your friend, Great-grandma Bizzy |
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