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Whats Love Got To Do With It?
Contributed by
ell_03
on
Thursday, 23rd December 2004 @ 04:31:49 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Is this the end,
when was the start,
why are you doing this to me,
how can you break my heart?
Was there ever a time,
you realized my feelings for you,
I think now, you never knew,
this game was meant for two.
Did you never notice,
my lonely heartful glance,
did you never notice,
the way I watched you dance?
Now I realize,
it wasn't meant to be,
it was my fault to think,
that you were right for me.
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ell_03
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2004-12-23 16:31:49]
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Re: Whats Love Got To Do With It?
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 23rd December 2004 @ 04:40:33 PM AEST
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| Yea, at 14 you don't really understand what love really is, but I know where you're coming from, because I've been there too. Anyway, this is a really good piece. You have a lot of potential :-) |
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Re: Whats Love Got To Do With It?
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 23rd December 2004 @ 06:02:34 PM AEST
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| Very good write, young one. Keep writing, you portray your feelings very well.......Mike |
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Re: Whats Love Got To Do With It?
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by Rakerman1999 on
Thursday, 23rd December 2004 @ 07:37:40 PM AEST
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I agree with Mike...
You have a great potential. Keep writing.
Very well done
Larry |
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Re: Whats Love Got To Do With It?
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by Essentially9 on
Thursday, 23rd December 2004 @ 08:58:30 PM AEST
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| i loved this write. you wrote it so well. you might not know much about love, but you make it seem like you do. powerful ending also. |
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