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They Think They Know
Contributed by
ell_03
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Thursday, 23rd December 2004 @ 04:50:03 PM in AEST
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InspirationalPoems
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The people here,
know nothing more,
than what they think they see.
They look around,
without a thought,
then start the mockery.
They think they know what I'm about,
and can judge the outer me,
but they'll never truely know until they truely see.
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ell_03
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2004-12-23 16:50:03]
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Re: They Think They Know
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by Essentially9 on
Thursday, 23rd December 2004 @ 04:52:32 PM AEST
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| very true. you wrote this wonderfully. i loved the flow and everything. you cant truely ever see because you are always blind to something. i would be happy to listen. =] |
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Re: They Think They Know
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by gery_giggles on
Thursday, 23rd December 2004 @ 04:55:11 PM AEST
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hey..great poem...so many people feel that way and i cant stand when people asume something without even getting to know the person. if you wanna talk just pm me
love always |
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Re: They Think They Know
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by alecfernadez on
Thursday, 23rd December 2004 @ 05:09:20 PM AEST
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I think this was brillianty written, especially for a 14 year old, you are very talented. I've felt like this before, and I'm sure alot of people have felt this way before as well. But quoting from your poem
"but they'll never truely know until they truely see"
People are *****, and cant be bothered to get to know people who they dont like the look of, or sound of. I think the best way around it, is just say;
" ***** you, I am who I am, and if you dont like it, then ***** off"
Yet again I am older than you... So I would probably get you to say:
"I'm fed up of your trashy mouths, I am who I am, and if you dont like it, well, bog off"
Yet again...
Keep up the great work, and dont let people put u down, or pay attention to them, because you are brilliant
Alex |
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Re: They Think They Know
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by Rakerman1999 on
Thursday, 23rd December 2004 @ 06:16:00 PM AEST
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hmmmm...that was really a very good bit of work. Great R&R....impressive
Very well done
Larry
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Re: They Think They Know
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by Unspoken_Love on
Thursday, 23rd December 2004 @ 08:15:30 PM AEST
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| this is a very good poem... I've felt like that so many times, I hate when people judge you based on what they first see. Well if you still want an asnwer to that question e-mail me anytime... If you want to email me on hotmail it's q_tip_zaboomafoo@hotmail.com. I'll help as much as I can! |
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Re: They Think They Know
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by SoUR_GuRL67 on
Thursday, 23rd December 2004 @ 11:31:43 PM AEST
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| Great poem. Good expression. |
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