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Nothing More Than An Unimportant Feeling
Contributed by
pyrofungus
on
Thursday, 23rd December 2004 @ 07:49:20 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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My eyes are filled with nothing more than hollowed out tear drops
That fall but never land
Catch one in your hand
And carry it close to your heart
It is just a feeling
Nothing more than an unimportant feeling
That I couldnt hold back anymore
It feel out
Refusing to stay put where it belonged
Amongst the others
It was singled out
And put aside
As nothing more than an unimportant feeling
That is carried within my eyes
You can see them set aside
Just look into my eyes
As they fall from them
Catch them
And carry them with you
Next to your heart
For I have given you a piece of mine
To put next to yours
Amongst my other unimportant feelings
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pyrofungus
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2004-12-23 19:49:20]
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Re: Nothing More Than An Unimportant Feeling
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by autumngreeneyes on
Thursday, 23rd December 2004 @ 09:27:22 PM AEST
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great poem..I really liked it.
You might want to check your spelling..use among and not amongst..and fell and not feel..otherwise it's great. |
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Re: Nothing More Than An Unimportant Feeling
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by Essentially9 on
Thursday, 23rd December 2004 @ 09:35:13 PM AEST
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| great write. a lot of things to me are unimportant, a lot of feelings especially. |
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Re: Nothing More Than An Unimportant Feeling
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by BabyFacedAngel2010 on
Friday, 24th December 2004 @ 01:13:16 PM AEST
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Nice Write
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Re: Nothing More Than An Unimportant Feeling
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by Ell on
Friday, 24th December 2004 @ 04:48:49 PM AEST
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| I like this one, it puts a lot of imagery into play and captures the feeling, I have felt this way often and enjoy reading about such vivid and tangible word choices |
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