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Mad man pain of insanity
Contributed by
spirit_of_dark_tears
on
Friday, 24th December 2004 @ 12:58:58 AM in AEST
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Pain in side cant get out locked up the lights are bright I see the end I feel the pain of insanitys blade pierces my skin lets out my sin blood of my mother blood of my sun insanitys hell has begun is the lights of crimson stone insanity will reap what I have sewn the lies fill my eyes blood shot eyes red as satins eyes my flesh burns to dust blown by the wind scattered like my mind no more lies confession flowing from my eyes let the wicked be judged in a right mind blown away betrayal of time reckless and unforgiving state of mind sinister snake leach from hell beach sand of grime stone dreams are made of this flash back to reality can not move when your 6 feet under can you grasp this made mans die breath numbed torn and tortured such is the way of insanity
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Re: Mad man pain of insanity
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by bluebird on
Friday, 24th December 2004 @ 03:28:42 AM AEST
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wow you have talent. i woulda added sum commas of breaks in somwhere but the way you set it out added to the feel of goin insane so great work!
~keep the faith~
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Re: Mad man pain of insanity
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Friday, 24th December 2004 @ 07:04:20 AM AEST
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| i liked this, very sad in a way. a very powerdul write. i agree with bluebird maybe some pronounciation would make it better....but it still is very good. |
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