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it takes a moment
Contributed by
bluebird
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Friday, 24th December 2004 @ 03:33:28 AM in AEST
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When I reminisce, I often cry, missing those who've been strung out or died,
I dont understand how they could give up their life, but all the while I was so blind/ I was slowly dippin into the same fate, blinded by excuses, anger and hate, now I understand, to the lost ones I relate,I just hope I can overcome it and start with a clean slate/ I know the people I've lost would want more for me, there prolly looking down thinking "How could this be?" I thought lifes traps were easy to see, but it only takes a moment to end up like me.
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Re: it takes a moment
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 24th December 2004 @ 03:49:18 AM AEST
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| Very well said. Sad :( |
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Re: it takes a moment
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Friday, 24th December 2004 @ 06:45:02 AM AEST
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i really liked this, it was simple but you put the words together so well. nice flow....and yes this is sad...well done
take care |
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