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Suffering Sadness
Contributed by
Sirena_Degana
on
Friday, 24th December 2004 @ 07:04:17 PM in AEST
Topic:
ApologyPoetry
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Just to let you know...
I'm standing in a mirror...
With no face...
And no space...
Could this reflection be shattered any less.
Just me...
Jumping on a thin stretch of air...
If it breaks will you catch me...
In a thin red hoodie...covered in sleet...
I stand next to you...
shivering from the cold...
shut your mouth and listen to me tremble...
like an earthquake I split wide open...
spilling over the lies....
and the back I see that should be your face.
No one hears me...
You suffocate me...
And that gift of breath I thought you gave sincerely
Floated away with all the lies you mentioned.
To me...
To her...
To him...
To them...
...To you...
Copyright ©
Sirena_Degana
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2004-12-24 19:04:17]
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Re: Suffering Sadness
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by surge_joebot on
Friday, 24th December 2004 @ 07:27:17 PM AEST
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| very powerful and very well writen |
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Re: Suffering Sadness
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Saturday, 25th December 2004 @ 02:18:16 AM AEST
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| wow this is really good well done!!!!!!! |
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Re: Suffering Sadness
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by weezer21 on
Friday, 31st December 2004 @ 01:03:55 PM AEST
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HOLY F*ck! that was a GREAT poem...i cant totally relate to it too which makes it even better...i was trying to put this in words and I couldn't do it...you did it so well...great write
-x jessi x- |
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Re: Suffering Sadness
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Friday, 30th September 2005 @ 09:23:09 AM AEST
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| amazing, well done |
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