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can i stab you?
Contributed by
surge_joebot
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Saturday, 25th December 2004 @ 03:08:15 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Can I accidentally stab someone?
Can I feel my knife kill them with this single shallow act?
Can I stab them?
Could I have them?
Trophy of my empty threated revenge...
Could I accidentally stab someone?
It could be someone I loved.
Someone that now only hurts me...
That possibly even hates me.
Could that warrant their death?
Maybe if they made me, pushed me, tempted me...
With their hate of me...
I could accidentally stab them,
Make them die.
This empty shallow revenge.
Accidentally stabbed you once again.
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2004-12-25 03:08:15]
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Re: can i stab you?
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by Loyalist on
Saturday, 25th December 2004 @ 03:29:13 AM AEST
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| A very stabbing verse. I was at once intrigued to read this poem by title alone. I'm glad I did. The idea is very interestingly good. Thanks for reading my opinion. |
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