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You’re lying beside her now
Contributed by
Doriens_Picture
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Saturday, 25th December 2004 @ 10:36:01 PM in AEST
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Hold me in your arms
For tonight you are stronger than
I and I need you
As the magic in your eyes that consumes me grows
My heart is begging for all it knows
The one true love that can never be spent
So I write this to you as my feelings vent
Tell me what you want of I cant take this anymore
I have never loved anyone like his before
Its no longer possible for you to be mine anymore
Youre lying beside her now, and I lie faithless and numb on the floor
Whenever I hear her name with yours, I feel shattered and blue,
Why has she got what I want? All I really want is you
I could give you so much more, all my love and heart,
But you didnt seem to care, you werent sad we had to part
You said you knew we were meant to be you thought so from the start
But then you hurt every piece of me after I had given you my all even my heart
After what you did to me how can I love anyone again?
How can I trust anyone again if I feel I will be hurt even then?
What can I do if I cant love someone as much as I did you?
I beg you dont make me mourn you I dont know what to do
Im left here alone, my soul crushed and in a mess,
I cant stop thinking of you; I love you I have to confess
But why does this love pain me so?
I cant stand what you did; I hated everyday, just wanting to let you go
So take a second and realize what you've done,
Breaking my spirit just for your one night of fun
You broke my heart once
Then you broke it once again
You cant be trusted
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2004-12-25 22:36:01]
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Re: You’re lying beside her now
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by autumngreeneyes on
Saturday, 25th December 2004 @ 11:05:28 PM AEST
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| I couldn't get into a rythem.. but I liked the words a lot. |
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Re: You’re lying beside her now
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by Gothchyk on
Sunday, 26th December 2004 @ 12:17:01 AM AEST
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you can't be trusted
I like this line, Great job. |
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Re: You’re lying beside her now
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by blowfish_jane on
Sunday, 26th December 2004 @ 01:18:02 AM AEST
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Lovely words are used in this poem, such a sad write.
Hugs,
Jane x |
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Re: You’re lying beside her now
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by Broken_Skin on
Sunday, 26th December 2004 @ 10:53:08 AM AEST
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| I knew you didnt mean all that you said to me lol |
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Re: You’re lying beside her now
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by little_genna on
Friday, 31st December 2004 @ 11:51:08 AM AEST
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I found this slightly hard to read as it did not have one single flow.
It seemed to be flowing in different directions at the same time.
But I really liked the words and what it was trying to say...
It is a very good poem and holds alot of different emotion.
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