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Tears
Contributed by
Riot_Girl
on
Sunday, 26th December 2004 @ 03:21:53 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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I lay in my bed
crying my eyes out
trying to figure out
on what this was all about?
I know you didnt mean to hurt me,
you were just kidding,
but still i lay here,
confused and thinking...
Why did you do this to me?
This pain is getting stronger
and now i wish i didn't know you
for any longer.
The bruises all over my body,
are now comming part of my skin,
and i don't know
how i could let you win.
I shouldn't have let you touch me!
I'm not your toy!
And now you will regret doing this!
your pain will be my joy.
The problem is,
your going to do it tomorrow and the next.
i swear you wont get away with this
until i rest.
I thought you loved me,
i thought you cared.
All i know now
is this pain is to much to bear.
I take the gun
and i hold it in my hands.
This will end it all,
this will be the last time i stand.
You have taken it all,
you have won;
and i will prove your victory
with this gun.
My eyes fill with tears
as i put it to my head.
I think about you and i close my eyes
and now im dead.
But now my heart and soul
is finally free
and all i wonder is
what life will you live without me?
Copyright ©
Riot_Girl
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2004-12-26 03:21:53]
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Re: Tears
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by Loyalist on
Sunday, 26th December 2004 @ 04:59:41 AM AEST
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| I can definitely sense your voice. I canot wait until you amass more poetry here. I'm sure more gems are to come. Very sad poem BTW. Thanks for reading my opinion. |
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Re: Tears
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Sunday, 26th December 2004 @ 05:24:23 AM AEST
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wow, this is a great write...i can relate soo much..all my poems are about this guy that totally messed me up
"I shouldn't have let you touch me!
I'm not your toy!
And now you will regret doing this!
your pain will be my joy." i love that bit and the end is sooo sad. i kno exactly how u feel.a very good piece of poetry. keep it up and keep hope.
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Re: Tears
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by humboldtsweetie33 on
Sunday, 26th December 2004 @ 06:30:22 PM AEST
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| very well written. good job |
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Re: Tears
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by sweetangeluk on
Monday, 27th December 2004 @ 03:50:27 PM AEST
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Very powerful words
No one who treats somone like this is worth your tears. Nor your life.
This was an excellent write if this is abt u get out now and live a happy life. Your body is a temple deserving respect not abuse.
Lots of love Sweetangelukxxxx |
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