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Everything
Contributed by
Mortis-Dark
on
Sunday, 26th December 2004 @ 04:24:03 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I remeber you.
Do you remember me too.
Born august, 30th.
The smell of roses made her cry.
Though your going far from home.
Rest assure your not alone.
Cause I would give everything that I own.
Id give you my heart and this skin and these bones.
The sun, The moon, The earth and sky.
I never really stopped to wonder why.
I would do anything.
I would give everything away.
To be your everything.
Seems like such a longlong time.
Since your body crossed my mind.
But I think that you should know.
It wasnt I who had to go.
Cuz I would give everything that I own.
Id give you my love and this heart made of stone.
The sun, The moon, The earth sky.
I would do anything.
I would give everything.
To be your everything.
But if ever you should stray.
Just sing along and I'll play.
Or look into your hands im slipping through them like a tiny grain of sand.
I remember you.
Do you remember me too.
Seems like such a long long time.
Since I held your near and called you mine.
Cuz I would give everything that I own.
I would give you my heart and this skin and these bones.
The sun, The moon, The earth, The sky.
A brand new car that you and I can drive,
I would give anything.
I would give everything.
To be your everything.
Copyright ©
Mortis-Dark
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2004-12-26 16:24:03]
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Re: Everything
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by autumngreeneyes on
Sunday, 26th December 2004 @ 04:40:37 PM AEST
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| Well..you asked..I like it..but whenever I see something I like..its hard not to play around and re-word and try to make it better..not that it isn't good already? But I want to play with it..but I can't because it isn't mine..so I'm frustrated now..see what you've done..LOL |
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Re: Everything
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by faffeee on
Sunday, 26th December 2004 @ 09:35:04 PM AEST
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its such a classic love song and i love it :)
"A brand new car that you and I can drive"
- i like this line, it makes me smile cos it makes me imagine such togetherness in a funny way! and this -
"But I think that you should know.
It wasnt I who had to go."
- just makes me want to cry...so you must've done a good job :) katie xx |
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Re: Everything
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by NightOwl on
Sunday, 10th April 2005 @ 11:22:59 AM AEST
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Truly exceptional! There is so much emotion in this piece!! Amazing!!
*~Erin~* |
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