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Giving In
Contributed by
luinil
on
Sunday, 26th December 2004 @ 10:56:53 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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A part of me
once sang faultless lie
faded distortion
portrait of you and i
bleeding, waiting
for my release tonight
will you come soon
and die here by my side
Moon light my grave
so I can see my bed
Sun hide your face
Match the cloud in my head
Rain wash the screams
from the path I tread
Death come steal me
Leave shadow in my stead
Copyright ©
luinil
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2004-12-26 22:56:53]
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Re: Giving In
(User Rating: 1 )
by pUnKa_RaCh on
Sunday, 26th December 2004 @ 11:33:04 PM AEST
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| wow, i really like this..youve used beautiful words and its so dark. well done |
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