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Pain
Contributed by
naughtygurl
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Monday, 27th December 2004 @ 01:52:28 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Pain,
Even in it's very name,
you can feel the chills
It hurts,
and yet you can't scream,
It dig's deep and courses through your body,
It runs through your vains,
and drains every bit of happiness out of you.
You can feel it , and you can't control it.....
It takes over you, your very soul.
You lose everything you knew.
How could this happen, how,
more like why, yes why...
When you cry you can feel your heart break
And it feels like its bleeding,
bleeding right through each and every memory.
Each breath filled with sharp daggers,
that rip through your throat.
Each tear blood,
Each scream for help lost in the wind ,
caught in your thraot.
The words for freedom they dance upon your lips...
But this freedom is your prison... this prison is you,
you keep it all inside,
forever, forever until u cant take it,
and it kills you, kills every part of you.
it will suffacte you, it will stab you, and you will never scream,
because you can't......
it burns through your heart.... but you can't
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2004-12-27 13:52:28]
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Re: Pain
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by smooshable on
Monday, 27th December 2004 @ 02:06:19 PM AEST
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| wow.... just wow.... The imagery in that poem is amazing, I wish I could do that. You've brought that writing to life and consistently kept it juicy. It's incredibly well written. |
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Re: Pain
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by Broken_Wingz on
Monday, 27th December 2004 @ 02:09:37 PM AEST
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You are a wonderful writer. Keep up the amazing work.
Krystal-Dawn |
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Re: Pain
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by StrwBrryStrBrst0225 on
Monday, 27th December 2004 @ 07:25:43 PM AEST
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| I like this it is a nice poem i mean the way its written, thankz for wrighting this... |
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Re: Pain
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by poetrygirl1991 on
Monday, 27th December 2004 @ 09:57:16 PM AEST
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| very well spoken, u dont cover ur feelings up, u let them all stream out....thats great wish i could do that...keep writing, u ll inspire others to do the same, thank you for writing this...keep sharing your thoughts!! |
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Re: Pain
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by Sinned on
Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 01:27:54 PM AEST
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Your emotions & feelings come through with every page.
Keep writing you touch the heart of a man even at my age
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Re: Pain
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by seci on
Monday, 30th May 2005 @ 01:27:23 PM AEST
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| i enjoyed your poem pain. i sea and i can feel through your poetry you must be going through alot. a word of advice, never let the bad outweight the good. you are avery excellent writer and a powerful thinker. i feel that u are doing good by writing your poetry online to express your feelings because someone can feel the same way as you do. you can be someones motivation. i promise to read more of your poems and try to uplift u in all spirit. if you need anyone to talk to or need advice, write me. i will understand. love seci |
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