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Hopeless
Contributed by
luinil
on
Monday, 27th December 2004 @ 05:48:09 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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I am blind to sun
Ive lost my way
Im too weary to run
Too afraid to stay
Trapped in sky between
The dirt I hold
And dream Ive seen
When fires burn cold
I have kept my feet
Broken by these stones
Your knife tastes so sweet
It numbs my shattered bones
Drop the hand I clutched
Fall to my knees
In snow untouched
Yield to my disease
Jaded by a savior
Who never came
Condemned stay yours
Im ended all the same
Copyright ©
luinil
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2004-12-27 17:48:09]
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Re: Hopeless
(User Rating: 1 )
by afterdark on
Sunday, 9th January 2005 @ 08:42:26 AM AEST
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| The last lines really are what made this all work for me..Impressive write.. |
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