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the life
Contributed by
k_kelly
on
Monday, 27th December 2004 @ 06:15:53 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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The love is lost
In the coldness of the world
Tears of joy
Are just fading away
Lives are being destroyed
By angry men
But yet still we choose no more
But to live in the world we live
And sleep in the bed we sleep
Not forgetting making love
To the lover you thought
Belonged to you and only you
But yet you still choose
The life you live.
Copyright ©
k_kelly
... [
2004-12-27 18:15:53]
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Re: the life
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by Luinil on
Monday, 27th December 2004 @ 06:22:21 PM AEST
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| very unique and powerful * |
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Re: the life
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by poetrygirl1991 on
Monday, 27th December 2004 @ 06:28:25 PM AEST
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| Very true and exotic compared to other poems based on the same writing!! |
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Re: the life
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by Spazzo on
Monday, 27th December 2004 @ 07:14:22 PM AEST
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Awesome poem.
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Re: the life
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by Lurking_Shadow on
Tuesday, 28th December 2004 @ 01:34:29 PM AEST
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A true poem with a powerful meaning=)
Great write |
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